Ben / Max / Ben
Well done on an excellent concept development so far; your pitch is well considered and informed by research, effective use of Prezi to visually represent your ideas. Your prop design is brilliant - absolutely terrifying! Your first shoot was very effective and as with all your previous tasks, you have been reflective of the technical strengths and weaknesses. I'm glad to see Ben's ideas on titles posted; this was missing from the pitch and needs to be put onto your animatic.
On viewing the animatic, you should consider the positioning of the titles; having the main title at the end does look a little like a trailer. It would be a good idea to add titles to animatic and post another draft.
In terms of planning, you have all submitted level 4 work; technical analysis most recently are detailed and reflective. Your practical work produced so far is of a very high quality technically, so you are working steadily towards an A. However Max and Ben S, there are some missing aspects from you both. You need to do the title analysis from last week and Max I can't see your second film analysis from last term. Both of you are also absent from the blog since Christmas; although the group posts are there, I would expect to see individual posts showing your contributions to aspects of planning / filming too. Can you also post audience research with results analysis.
Ben Sinden - I appreciate you have been absent due to illness; see me on your return for strategies for you to catch up.
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